Cayman Islands Writing Exemplar

Level 4a

Assessment Commentary:

AF1: 

Ideas & Voice

 – Write imaginative, interesting, and thoughtful texts

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The author provides and elaborates upon several ideas that are all related to the event. The opening and initial 

details answer the “who” “where,” “what,” “when,” “how,” and “why” questions. 

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The author’s voice and personality are evident through the use of conventions (e.g., exclamation marks,  

exaggeration, sharing feelings, and abundance of details). His/her style is unique compared to how others  

writeand his/her individuality shines through.