Cayman Islands Writing Exemplar

AF3: 

Organisation

 – Organise and present whole texts effectively, sequencing and structuring

information, ideas, and events

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The piece has an opening that is signaled by a logical sentence and clearly states the writer’s opinion  

(e.g., Can I get a fantastic pet fish?”).

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The piece also has a closing that restates the author’s opinion; however, it is nearly the same as the opening  

statement. 

AF4: 

Organisation

 – Construct paragraphs and use cohesion within and between paragraphs

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No evidence of generic linking words were used within the piece. 

•  The author utilizes independent sentences and is beginning to show awareness of grouping, made evident by 

his/her starting the closing on a separate line.

AF5: