Few Errors Highlighted
by: Chaya
1. If we remember -is more like the spoken language You need to formalize your language. To recall even in the 80's, postal mail continued to be the conventional mode of communication. no 80th 80's, 90's. no abbreviation like a.k.a
2. the way people communicated -past tense in 90's
3.In present times sounds better.
4. at the speed of light
5. either expense or cost. not both.
6.collecting dust- not dusk
7. smartphone---have overtaken- plural hence plural verb- subject verb agreement.
8. blackberry have made interaction very easy making even text messages obsolete.
9. which has escalated to become a powerful tool for poli...
10. remarked on this aspect has ... help him win
11. However, the negatives impact of internet cannot be ignored or overlooked.
sorry I am out of time. You need to work on ur writing skills especially the grammatical errors and sentence formation
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